its too small omg 0/5
not too bad at all I'd say, there is a part where the guy is buying soda but all you see is grass (mountains or hills) but that's not really important. you made the message clear, good work.
thanks for the criticism and for understanding
the animation isn't perfectly in sync as well as the video lags from here to there even on low quality settings (but it may be my crappy laptop..but you should still maybe try to fix that) and although it was short it was a bit funny. keep at it and in a few weeks,months, years your skills will improve by a lot and possibly become a famous well known animator some day. keep at it my friend.
First, it looks awful on my laptop, but great on my computer, so it's probably your crappy laptop. Second, hearing someone other than a family member say I might be a well known animator someday... it just... I can't put into words how much that means to me. It may seem stupid, but you made my day, my week, my month, and possibly, my fucking year.
Well, its a start, but you could make the text different since its really hard to read. Also change of music could be nice but that's just me, decent work for your first game. also did you get razor from nfsmw? lol
In fact yes. That is maybe my favourite nfs game(not because of pc). I'm listening to my comments so I think I can work on the music. I personally love this song but you're right because different people like different music. I have an idea about the music. Gonna work on it.
"I never asked for this"
love the series so far, can't wait for part 3
very spooky mate, but seriously nice tune to it.
the drop isn't as satisfying as I'd like plus the I have to go/I have/must leave gets somewhat repetitive but for you first vocal song its not too shabby.
man this is the shit!
love it man keep it up.
remember kids, smoking kills! nice work friend.
Down with tobaco!
omg stop with the lenny faces there so stale....nice work ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
ill try my best
if this is in madness combat 10, I think it was worth the wait, don't you agree my friends?
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